Carrot Crew
The intro for this video is too long and doesn’t attract the
viewer. I understand that they need to have the information however they have
left too long for the reader to read it they could have also put some sound
track to it. The text they have at the beginning I feel that they should have a
voice over reading it. I think this voice over should be a dramatic voice this
attracts the viewers and help them engage. They make it so that it not very believable,
I don’t feel as though the children are being serious enough which makes this
more of a comedy. However, I feel as though it not quite serious but not quite humorous
therefore I feel as though they should make it more clear on which they want it
to be.
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