Abbie you are potentially a good writer and the work so far has some imaginative passages. You do tend to under-write at the moment - you need to take more time to develop characters and situations. Your work would currently be at PASS level if it were to be assessed but I think you should be able to bring it to merit level with more development. Nothing we have done so far is assessed as part of the qualification though - we are just learning the craft!
Abbie you are potentially a good writer and the work so far has some imaginative passages. You do tend to under-write at the moment - you need to take more time to develop characters and situations. Your work would currently be at PASS level if it were to be assessed but I think you should be able to bring it to merit level with more development. Nothing we have done so far is assessed as part of the qualification though - we are just learning the craft!
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